Nothing is left but darkness
There’s nothing left to live for
There’s nothing about life to cherish about
Hatred meets at every path
Unhappiness in the eye for every dream lived
Life has come to an end
Where but only one path leads
That of
Unhappiness
Hatred
Tears
Solitude
Longing
There’s nothing left to live for
There’s nothing about life to cherish about
Hatred meets at every path
Unhappiness in the eye for every dream lived
Life has come to an end
Where but only one path leads
That of
Unhappiness
Hatred
Tears
Solitude
Longing
posted by ziana | 11:36 PM
5 Comments:
"there is nothing 'about' life to cherish 'about'"??
gramatically incorrect...or do u have poetic license..??
You are just examining one aspect of life, the part you want to get rid of. Instead of getting rid of it, try balancing it with the other side of the coin.
thankyou for ure comments...i really appreciate ur concern ...but thats how iam...and this is wat i write..be it gramattically correct or incorrect
by the way wat aacording to you should be 'gramatically correct'
minus one 'about', i think they mean. Erase the last one.
'...for every dream lived.'
that's a brilliant phrase.
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