Unknown Voice
Once there was a girl called Zehrana. Innocence defining her face, she looked at the world with a gleam of excitement. Being the only child to her parents she had noone to talk to so she found solace in that voice which made itself only to her. Once while in her room, her mother discovered that she was talking but there was noone around. Worried, zehrana’s mother spoke to her husband and they together decided to move her to the asylum.
She was given electric shocks, gradually she lost her speech. Her parents cried,regretted sending her away,but her voice was not to return. But she still smiled.She didn’t need to communicate with anybody. The voice still spoke to her.Her soul was her companion being her friend in need,a guiding hand when lost and a smile when tears adorned her face. The voice of her soul was enough for her,her best friend.The best friend anybody can have.
She was given electric shocks, gradually she lost her speech. Her parents cried,regretted sending her away,but her voice was not to return. But she still smiled.She didn’t need to communicate with anybody. The voice still spoke to her.Her soul was her companion being her friend in need,a guiding hand when lost and a smile when tears adorned her face. The voice of her soul was enough for her,her best friend.The best friend anybody can have.
posted by ziana | 10:03 AM
4 Comments:
love the post - said the same before
but i still dont like the title.
its too 'every noun must have an adjective'.
oi!
update!
seriously speaking .. parents will be the last ones to move their only child to an asylum jst coz they heard her talk to herself
its normal for kids to talk to themselves ya know
specially lonely ones
and parents know that
good post,good writing
not realistic enough
u can do better.
thanks for the suggestions.
its not about being lonely or not.
its about having someone even though not in the 'physical presence' way
and u do have yourself.
thats what i was tring to bring out.
most of us seek company.. just to fill in the empty spaces
but friendship isnt about dependdence.
its about freedom. and love.
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